tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post8390313772442732885..comments2024-02-06T04:10:08.726-08:00Comments on When I Stopped to Smell a Rose: तुम मुझे सार्थक कर देना sunaina sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-39755337334746124932017-03-11T11:23:21.442-08:002017-03-11T11:23:21.442-08:00So beautifully put, Sunaina! You have actually ju...So beautifully put, Sunaina! You have actually justifief (sarthak-ed) your name...the one not only with beautiful eyes but a beautiful vision too...compassionate and genuine, appreciative and inspiring, ALWAYS positive and sensitive ... Lived this one. :)<br />PS. Apologies for mutilating Hindi and English both, with sarthak-ed but it seemed correct.Kokila guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14992236728883850513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-29869826841783582322017-03-11T05:42:23.298-08:002017-03-11T05:42:23.298-08:00This is so beautiful Sunaina. Only a pillow can wi...This is so beautiful Sunaina. Only a pillow can witness the agony of sleepless moments, but I don't think anyone ever had thought of that. Sometimes I deeply regret missing your masterpieces, and this is one of them. :)Sangeeta Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13688928647289532302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-48093915021461916052017-03-11T05:14:28.760-08:002017-03-11T05:14:28.760-08:00Somehow resonates with 'hazaroon khwahishen ai...Somehow resonates with 'hazaroon khwahishen aisi.' Beautiful nonetheless!Alok singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13464535666153172726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-22695764351058229152017-03-11T02:51:54.814-08:002017-03-11T02:51:54.814-08:00Sensitive pillow's heart wrenching tale! Love...Sensitive pillow's heart wrenching tale! Lovely:)<br />Wonderfully conceptualized..!Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-25555253778202669742016-03-21T05:49:08.035-07:002016-03-21T05:49:08.035-07:00Thanks Somali.Thanks Somali.sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-20009321857321975742016-03-21T05:48:57.670-07:002016-03-21T05:48:57.670-07:00True....Manisha's lines were mind-blowing!True....Manisha's lines were mind-blowing!sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-61853070730747615042016-03-16T20:14:08.939-07:002016-03-16T20:14:08.939-07:00The pillow soaks the tears and absorbs the pain. W...The pillow soaks the tears and absorbs the pain. Wow lovely thought Sunaina! I loved the poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15553273840339778643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-63164390989603145102016-03-16T15:15:41.111-07:002016-03-16T15:15:41.111-07:00What personification ...beautifully penned :) I lo...What personification ...beautifully penned :) I loved Manisha's comment too :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01272566806003281467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-10344044210332404192016-03-16T06:09:05.329-07:002016-03-16T06:09:05.329-07:00सही कहा आपने। मुझे बहुत ख़ुशी है कि आपको मेरे विचा...सही कहा आपने। मुझे बहुत ख़ुशी है कि आपको मेरे विचार अच्छे लगे । sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-73869704817741653272016-03-16T04:47:05.568-07:002016-03-16T04:47:05.568-07:00सुनैना जी, यहां तो इंसान भी इंसान की भावनाओं की कद...सुनैना जी, यहां तो इंसान भी इंसान की भावनाओं की कद्र नहीं करते! और आपने एक निर्जिव तकिए की भावनाओं को इतने अच्छे से व्यक्त कर दिया। बधाई। Jyoti Dehliwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529225013258741331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-6332854632723695612016-03-15T06:44:32.701-07:002016-03-15T06:44:32.701-07:00Thanks!Thanks!sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-62381635382455494662016-03-15T06:44:21.608-07:002016-03-15T06:44:21.608-07:00Thanks Shanti.Thanks Shanti.sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-49793123405276618772016-03-15T06:44:10.261-07:002016-03-15T06:44:10.261-07:00I kept beating about the bush.....you nailed it in...I kept beating about the bush.....you nailed it in such few words....:)....Thanks Manisha.sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-70477968617341980742016-03-15T06:43:30.850-07:002016-03-15T06:43:30.850-07:00I understand your point Sarthak. I am not that goo...I understand your point Sarthak. I am not that good at Hindi....but will try to work on your suggestion next time I write something in Hindi. Thanks!sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-71000816369736138032016-03-15T06:42:41.816-07:002016-03-15T06:42:41.816-07:00Other's shoes...? Well, who knows....!Other's shoes...? Well, who knows....!sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-59887540603620031872016-03-15T06:42:12.405-07:002016-03-15T06:42:12.405-07:00Kind words Lata....:)Kind words Lata....:)sunaina sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07848852013009581839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-62681676864845530792016-03-12T21:19:27.332-08:002016-03-12T21:19:27.332-08:00सार्थक व प्रशंसनीय रचना...
मेरे ब्लॉग की नई पोस्ट ...सार्थक व प्रशंसनीय रचना...<br />मेरे ब्लॉग की नई पोस्ट पर आपका स्वागत है।<br />Shanti Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03904536727101665742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-61880679459776200382016-03-10T18:58:56.965-08:002016-03-10T18:58:56.965-08:00अगर तकिये बोल पाते
न जाने, कितने राज खोल जातें।अगर तकिये बोल पाते<br />न जाने, कितने राज खोल जातें।Manisha Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926877851245985980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-86374152734248579372016-03-10T14:23:24.624-08:002016-03-10T14:23:24.624-08:00nicely written and I love it whenever my name appe...nicely written and I love it whenever my name appears somewhere, especially in something this good. But you can be so much better Sunaina. I don't write poetry but still, you should be careful with putting sensitive hindi words along with those of varnacular urdu. Hindi words spoken normally may fit in with those heavy words but urdu + pure hindi break the beat a bit. Again, not a critique of your poem, just a suggestion :)<br />A B Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04935620254642149954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-27205105552193323272016-03-10T10:34:07.335-08:002016-03-10T10:34:07.335-08:00Beautifully writtenBeautifully writtenPurba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-34152200764737115082016-03-10T08:27:07.306-08:002016-03-10T08:27:07.306-08:00The way you put yourself in other's shoes.... ...The way you put yourself in other's shoes.... just awesome. :)Ravish Manihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06743610113574998103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-87379028680924050502016-03-10T08:00:11.219-08:002016-03-10T08:00:11.219-08:00Sunaina, your parents named you well. Your writing...Sunaina, your parents named you well. Your writing enchants. One will hold these lines close just as one holds a favourite pillow in joy and anguishAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10810476854445237221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3642806346148349103.post-29537278187607682016-03-10T08:00:01.325-08:002016-03-10T08:00:01.325-08:00Sunaina, your parents named you well. Your writing...Sunaina, your parents named you well. Your writing enchants. One will hold these lines close just as one holds a favourite pillow in joy and anguishAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10810476854445237221noreply@blogger.com