Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Secrets of the Night.....

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 Tonight's moon
whispers to me of secrets
Phoebe hides...
This Haiku is written in response to Carpe Diem Haiku prompt - tonight's moon. Please click here to read some wonderful pieces the writer shares here....my personal favorite is the one by Paloma.

 Do share your thoughts on my attempt.

 Phoebe is the goddess of moon in Greek mythology.
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13 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 23, 2015 at 2:06 PM

    A very literary haiku - beautifully done.

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 23, 2015 at 4:09 PM

    Gorgeous haiku ... real autumn feelings. Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai ... hope to see you here again.

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    1. sunaina sharmaSeptember 23, 2015 at 6:03 PM

      Oh....did you really like it......I am attempting this after some blogger friends liked my previous attempts and suggested me to go for Carpe Diem......will keep coming back for sure....and hope to see you here again too....:)

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  3. UnknownSeptember 23, 2015 at 7:30 PM

    Superb Haiku!

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    1. sunaina sharmaSeptember 24, 2015 at 9:40 AM

      Thanks Usha ji....your feedback is really important for me....was waiting for it.....:)

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  4. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    Beautifuly written, i enjoyed it very much :) Bastet

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    1. sunaina sharmaSeptember 24, 2015 at 9:42 AM

      Thanks Georgia....welcome to my blog......hope you enjoyed enough to come back again....:)

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  5. sunaina sharmaSeptember 24, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    Thanks Dove.....I have just begun writing Haiku and I am happy to get positive responses.....feeling encouraged to write more.....:)

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 24, 2015 at 10:00 AM

    It takes a sharp ear to hear those secrets.

    Waiting for Moonrise

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    1. sunaina sharmaSeptember 24, 2015 at 10:07 AM

      sharp ear indeed or maybe some imagination........:)....welcome hear.....:)

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  7. MSeptember 28, 2015 at 4:33 AM

    nice..

    https://storymirror.com/stories/repo/all

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