Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Secrets of the Night.....

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Tonight's moon
whispers to me of secrets
Phoebe hides...


This Haiku is written in response to Carpe Diem Haiku prompt - tonight's moon. Please click here to read some wonderful pieces the writer shares here....my personal favorite is the one by Paloma.

Do share your thoughts on my attempt.

Phoebe is the goddess of moon in Greek mythology.


14 comments:

  1. A very literary haiku - beautifully done.

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    1. I am glad you liked it.....welcome here.....:)

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  2. Gorgeous haiku ... real autumn feelings. Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai ... hope to see you here again.

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    1. Oh....did you really like it......I am attempting this after some blogger friends liked my previous attempts and suggested me to go for Carpe Diem......will keep coming back for sure....and hope to see you here again too....:)

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    1. Thanks Usha ji....your feedback is really important for me....was waiting for it.....:)

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  4. A great classical feel -- and yet also mysterious. Nicely done!

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    1. Thanks Dove.....I have just begun writing Haiku and I am happy to get positive responses.....feeling encouraged to write more.....:)

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  5. Beautifuly written, i enjoyed it very much :) Bastet

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    1. Thanks Georgia....welcome to my blog......hope you enjoyed enough to come back again....:)

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    1. sharp ear indeed or maybe some imagination........:)....welcome hear.....:)

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  7. nice..

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