Friday, March 25, 2016

#ThatDay .....

I attempted one-liners for this prompt. The second on is personal, while the other two are based on some harsh realities many people face. Do leave your feedback. Thanks!



That day, it rained so hard, not a drop of water was left to drink.

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That day, I bid final goodbye not just to my father, but to my childhood as well.

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That day, I couldn't stop crying as I saw the child-bride say goodbye to her toys.



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Written for IndiSpire #110

25 comments:

  1. Beautiful! Loved the one-liners <3
    Cheers, Srivi - https://thepisceanme.wordpress.com

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  2. All the three one liners are very touching Sunaina.

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  3. All the three one liners are very touching Sunaina.

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  4. Wonderful one liners, captivating. Sunaina well done :)

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  5. All the 3 one-liners are so touching! :')

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  6. Beautifully written all three, I loved the second the best :)

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  7. Hard hitting Sunaina. At times, a choice few words are so much more powerful than lengthy diatribes

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  8. Wow! I am in love with the way you write! Really good!
    Prerna
    http://www.vivalahighstreet.com

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  9. बहुत बढिया सुनैना जी!

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  10. Great Sunaina!
    your one lines weigh heavy on hundred pages

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  11. Terrific one liners, Sunaina!
    Can't decide which one I liked most:)

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  12. Touching lines. I wish that day would never come again. :(

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  13. बहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति

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  14. Superb one-liners! Emotional as well as mystical. Kudos, Sunaina :)

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