I attempted one-liners for this prompt. The second on is personal, while the other two are based on some harsh realities many people face. Do leave your feedback. Thanks!
That day, it rained so hard, not a drop of water was left to drink.
Written for IndiSpire #110
That day, it rained so hard, not a drop of water was left to drink.
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That day, I bid final goodbye not just to my father, but to my childhood as well.
That day, I couldn't stop crying as I saw the child-bride say goodbye to her toys.
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That day, I couldn't stop crying as I saw the child-bride say goodbye to her toys.
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Written for IndiSpire #110
That was so touching..:)
ReplyDeleteAll 3 agreeable points, well said.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Loved the one-liners <3
ReplyDeleteCheers, Srivi - https://thepisceanme.wordpress.com
All the three one liners are very touching Sunaina.
ReplyDeleteAll the three one liners are very touching Sunaina.
ReplyDeleteWonderful one liners, captivating. Sunaina well done :)
ReplyDeleteAll the 3 one-liners are so touching! :')
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written all three, I loved the second the best :)
ReplyDeleteHard hitting Sunaina. At times, a choice few words are so much more powerful than lengthy diatribes
ReplyDeleteWow! I am in love with the way you write! Really good!
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ReplyDeleteSimply, Wonderful
ReplyDeleteGreat Sunaina!
ReplyDeleteyour one lines weigh heavy on hundred pages
Terrific one liners, Sunaina!
ReplyDeleteCan't decide which one I liked most:)
Good one Sunaina. :)
ReplyDeleteVery touching lines.
ReplyDeleteSome days remain etched in memory!
ReplyDeleteNostalgic
ReplyDeleteTouching lines. I wish that day would never come again. :(
ReplyDeleteOh no , that is sad ...
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Loved the liners.Touching!
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति
ReplyDeleteSuperb one-liners! Emotional as well as mystical. Kudos, Sunaina :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice...
ReplyDeleteAll are very touching.
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