A sip for meaningless survival
Hides my heritage
In danger of being looted...
Its sanctity concealed from prying eyes
A legacy sequestered by a fake layer
An heirloom meant to be flaunted but
Not in times like these
A love that ought to be proclaimed loud but
Spoken only in whispers here
A hope buried to protect it.
Ah the irony!
I wish you live even when I die.
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I wrote this poem after reading an article on Huffington Post - Heartbreaking New Discovery At Auschwitz As Jewelry Found Hidden Inside A Mug . The pictures of the mug seemed to speak to me distantly but distinctly. You can see read more on this and see more pictures here.
Linking to Day 5 of Write Tribe Festival of Words # 5
Sunaina, you nailed it! The Smart Soul who hid it so beautifully would have felt these words!
ReplyDeleteIt was the sheer helplessness of the poor soul.....but it worked for him and was discovered years later.....
DeleteBeautiful, touching and soulful.
ReplyDeleteCheerz
Thanks Vishal....
DeleteIsn't it sad that this beautiful ring is all that remains of a beautiful life?
ReplyDeleteAptly said.....so sad....
DeleteSo tragic. Your poem depicted the desperation well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Suzy.....
DeleteMakes me wonder what other relics are yet to be unearthed, that'll bring back those heartbreaking memories for many.
ReplyDeleteTrue Vinay....
DeleteSo many stories hidden in this ring... beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteSo many stories hidden for sure......
DeleteVery tragic and poignant story from a painful period in history! The last line is very haunting...keeps coming back to mind again and again.
ReplyDeleteYes Esha......a painful period it was for those who suffered through it....
DeleteSo many deaths. So many memories. Poignant lines, yours.
ReplyDeleteAnd many more hidden....
DeleteThe poem reminded me of Shindler's List! A beautiful poem that echoes the pangs and pain of the ring's owner!
ReplyDeleteOh really.....thanks Kala.....
DeleteBeautiful poem!Poignant and touching!
ReplyDeleteThanks Subha....
Delete"A love that ought to be proclaimed loud", what a tragic line this is..The poem reflects the desperation of Auschwitz perfectly!
ReplyDeleteIt must have been so hard then.....
DeletePoignant tale, beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteThanks Payal....
DeleteTragic, yet beautiful. It survived through all these years against all odds. It's history and glory resonated in your words.
ReplyDeleteIrony of life....!
DeleteI pray authorities can find the descendants of this person who hid the ring. How poignant. Alana ramblinwitham.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteThat would really be good but I wonder how it will be made possible....
DeleteThat line where the owner wants to flaunt its jewels but couldn't because of the situation, told a story of pain and hope. Wonderful composition
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranju....these are only words but nobody can understand how painful it must have been to live and die during that time in history....
DeleteTouching words, Sunaina. It gives a pain to think of the owner of the jewellery...
ReplyDeleteTrue Maniparna....
DeleteHere the pain was known be beyond words any one can think of.. Presented it thru' a great emotional expression, Sunaina!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreedhar Sir....
DeletePainful and yet so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLike life....!
Deleteहृदयस्पर्शी रचना, सुनैना
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyoti ji....
Deleteहृदयस्पर्शी रचना, सुनैना
ReplyDeleteSo many painful memories from the holocaust..and these relics further add to the dark ages!
ReplyDeleteTrue....so may pains hidden....
DeleteBeautiful lines. I read the news article. Once again reading about the Jewish concentration camps of World War 2 brings out to my mind the horror of those days and the pain hidden in the words of your poem.
ReplyDeleteI was not aware of this news...Visited the link..to imagine those emotions while hiding the piece was cathartic! You have done a beautiful job with your piece, sunaina!😊
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