Come with me to my world of creations.....read me, stimulate me. Find a poem here and a story there, a thought here and a question there , you may see yourself somewhere, I might be there too. So let us read on without much ado....
Welcome at Carpet Diem. The 'riddle' is not very obvious in your haiku, but I like how you've tried it. Maybe you can try something 'your smile in the mirror' or 'your smiling shadow'.
Welcome at Carpet Diem. The 'riddle' is not very obvious in your haiku, but I like how you've tried it. Maybe you can try something 'your smile in the mirror' or 'your smiling shadow'.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback Kristjaan....will try again....:)
Deletedelightful lines and sentiment
ReplyDeleteThanks Joanna.....
DeleteLovely Sunaina !
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DeleteA good one, Sunaina
ReplyDeleteThanks Usha ji....:)
DeleteVery nicely done!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Janice...:)
DeleteA lovely haiku! Bastet
ReplyDeleteThanks Georgia....:)
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